Ok let's take a picture here 3 2 1 a train goes saving the kid from falling backward but the train
took the kid to and his dad was shocked It all happened so quickly! One minute he was standing
on the platform, the next he was hurtling through the air, hanging on for dear life…
took the kid to and his dad was shocked It all happened so quickly! One minute he was standing
on the platform, the next he was hurtling through the air, hanging on for dear life…
Where am I? The boy says to a man where in London he replies but was in America and was
going for two minutes the boy tells himself.
going for two minutes the boy tells himself.
This is impossible sony is that you mum where are you I am in my house here grab my hand I will
take there why is Londen so foggy because of the trains and there is a special train it so fast but
it changes the size and what it's look like the trains it was made in 1803.But I think it is not real
plus how did you get here I got here by the special train.
take there why is Londen so foggy because of the trains and there is a special train it so fast but
it changes the size and what it's look like the trains it was made in 1803.But I think it is not real
plus how did you get here I got here by the special train.
We need to get back, can we book a plane? The fog is too heavy and is going on for 2 more
weeks so cars and planes can’t do anything about it but trains can here but we need the train
one that is empty. You go left of the train station right. 20 MINUTES LATER.You want to
hear the good news or the bad news sony says the good news first his mother replies
The good news is that trains are full the bad news is that there are too many full trains.
weeks so cars and planes can’t do anything about it but trains can here but we need the train
one that is empty. You go left of the train station right. 20 MINUTES LATER.You want to
hear the good news or the bad news sony says the good news first his mother replies
The good news is that trains are full the bad news is that there are too many full trains.
Three hours later...
I found the train well goodbye mum goodbye. Zoom the train goes flying by
the END
I think you used your what you already know about London to add detail to your story. London can be very foggy and the underground trains very full!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Tai. Thanks for adding your story to your blog. You have started to use good description to build a picture for your reader about how the scene looks - foggy, busy and surrounded by a variety of different types of trains. Don't forget to reread your story and add in punctuation like full stops and speech marks. Make sure your writing doc is in your writing folder and I will add comments onto it to guide you where punctuation is needed. Keep up the great work, Tai!
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