Friday, 1 May 2020
Disappearing World part 4
Wait they are coming in hide Said Alan then they we all were hiding and the army they were floating around and they had and It was going to Alan then Alan raced across the store so he didn’t get caught. Then they looked at an image and they looked at Alan but he was camouflage and then the robot left. But as soon as Alan stands up the robot comes back inside with aliens then the Allen put liquorice handcuffs on Alan me and Alan almost laughed then they put Alan to their HQ and then leave we all start to laughing because they looked like dumb eggs Wow so scary cried Stick I am dying of laughter cried X-ray don’t think that they are not bad they could be servant for someone but did you see the handcuffs busted Tai then they all stared to go to sleep and then they all wake up in a maze. Where are we says Stick we are not in a good my friend.
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Ka pai Tai. What an exciting story. I like your choice of words like camouflage. Hmm liquorice handcuffs would be tasty but pretty easy to escape from. Maybe next time put some more full stops in. I need to stop and take a breath when the story is this exciting!
ReplyDeletethank you Phil I will check my full stops in future stories. And also thank you for commenting and helping me
Deletekia ora tai ko Josh tooku ingoa and this is my story if you want to read it
ReplyDeleteMom I'm going to Carl's house today ’’ok’’. Hey Carl did you hear the news’’ No
I was watching King of the kingdom part 2’’ Well a kid went missing when he was playing with a paper boat next to the sidewalk, his name was georgie.’’ Did that really happen?” I guess so. Want to see if Katies knows’’ Yeah”
Hi Katie’’ Hey guys did you hear about the clown’’ what clown’’ Get in “ His name is bouncy the clown and he killed a boy named David’’ We were just talking about that but we did not know a clown took him’’ that's creepy’’ Carl said’’ wait what did you say his name was again’’ Bouncy The Clown” I saw a clown outside my neighbors house yesterday ’’Jack said” What time” Katie said’’ about 1:20 in the morning’’
What the hell were you doing up at 1:20 in the morning!” Carl said” The real question is how did you know that it as not outside your house ’’Katie said, ” because I don't even know who my neighbors are and their house looks creepy.
Hey whats that” hey kids my name is bouncy I want to find my home” AAAHH! RUN!’’ HAHAHA’’ Hide at my house Get in Get in’’ Katie yelled’’
Run upstairs’’ wait did you lock the door’’ gulp no” lets check on the balcony’’ I don't think he is out there’’ maybe he is downstairs” Don't say that!” Shhh I think he heard us” Jack said” guys he is downstairs” out the window” but it's raining’’ shut up carl”guys he is here!” I just want to be your friend hahaha’’ Bouncy said” RUN!”
I think we lost him let's call my dad” Katie said” dam no signal. Let's go to my house” said Jack” But he already knows where you live” Said Katie” good point” Jack replied . I will go get my lucky baseball bat” Jack said bravely.”
Jack went to his house and got his lucky baseball bat and ran back to Katie's house and waited for bouncy the clown to show up at Katie's front door and when bouncy came, Jack opened the door bravely and hit bouncy right in the face with his lucky baseball bat and bouncy was dying slowly until Carl was jumping on him. Then Jack saw a stray dog on the street and called it trevor he gave Trevour to Katie as a present from this moment then Katie gave him a big kiss on the cheek and went back to her house with Trevor’’ any chance of me getting one’’ Carl said’’ No” Jack replied.
The end I hope
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